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Fatal Facination
(#) mysilentromance 2010-05-18
This chapter really makes you think. We're all capable of being a killer, and in a sense we all are. (Though not always in the literal sense of course.) My favorite Charles Manson quote really sums this point up - "Look down at me and you see a fool; look up at me and you see a god; look straight at me and you see yourself."
Like you said in this chapter, we're one in the same. And we shouldn't be too quick to judge others while we're liable to maybe even do the same.
Sorry for such a long review, but what I'm trying to say is please write a sequal. This story is so brilliant, and it would be interesting to see where you can take it in the future.Author's response
Yeah its a very true statement! And I was watching criminal Minds last night about two guys who hunted people in the woods like animals. and when they were caught the cop was asking herself. "We hunt people like him everyday, how different are we really, except hiding behind a badge." And I thought that was so amazing! haha. Yes I plan on a sequel, so you can see how Mikey is, and stuff, just gotta work out the kinks. :) thank you so so so much for your review, i LOVE long ones. haha and thanks for not forgetting this story!!!Fatal Facination
(#) shortygirl 2010-05-18
Wow i wasn't expecting that at all.
It's been an awesome storyFatal Facination
(#) shortygirl 2010-05-18
I totally 4got about this earlier but what happens with Mikey? Will he ever find Gee? And yes a sequel would be awesomeFatal Facination
(#) Skullcandy 2010-05-19
I never expected this to happen
This is the most original story I've read
Your an amzing writer
Please,please,please write a sequel!
Its more then worthy!Author's response
I am actually kinda surprised to hear that I am a good writer. thank you so much! This is my first story.. ever that I have written and finished,but since you guys like it I will definitely make a sequel for you guys!Fatal Facination
(#) GoddessFire 2010-05-21
Sweeeeeeeeet! Ok I am expecting a sequel, because this story is amazing! Yayay! Rate for you!Fatal Facination
(#) XsadX 2010-06-13
Oh my gosh! It's amazing! Please write a sequel!!! This story is so original. I made an account just to read it! :DFatal Facination
(#) mikaylaxiero 2010-07-22
Good old sadistic fun.
I loved this, i agree with some of the others, you're a great writer and i've never read a story that turned out quite like this did. A sequel would make me really happy.Fatal Facination
(#) MicVSMoshpit 2010-10-07
Here is my two cents:
You are a decent writer, and this is a good plot for a story, and over all, its pretty great!! definetely exciting and what the reader expected, you wrote the opposite. A good read, I applaud you. Just a couple of pointers to make you a GREAT writer.
Make sure to edit your writing. A few mistakes here and there are okay but when there are constantly mistake, it's just plain old annoying.
Also, work on your spacing. It gets hard and annoying to read when everything is jammed together in one big paragraph. Other than that, Bravo!Fatal Facination
(#) PapaRoachGirlRayanna 2011-03-16
Love the story. Have been a MASSIVE fan of it. I love the story plots, and your writing skills are AMAZING! I think the idea of a Sequel would be AMAzing.
Thanks for wrting :)
Rayanna xxAuthor's response
Okaaayy, You are about the 5th person to say something in the last week, so I am making the sequel. :)
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