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Numb Again

by InuKag 2 Reviews

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Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/23 - Updated: 2006/04/24 - 107 words - Complete

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  • Numb Again

    (#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30 06:21:00 AM

    I liked the tone and tempo you've set here, but it still needs some editing work. In particular, the line "Numb to every motion" had me wondering if it should be "emotion" instead.

    Author's response

    no... it is supposed to be motion.
  • Numb Again

    (#) Haruno sakura 2006-05-07 04:06:36 PM

    Freakin aswome!

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