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Harry Potter, The Twilight Wolf
2 reviewsNot Twilight related. While seven year old Harry Potter is running away from his cousin he is bitten by a wolf and his life changes for ever.
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Harry Potter, The Twilight Wolf
(#) misteryman526 2010-06-06
Hmm. Doesn't seem very HP for some reason; just a generic story with Harry's name plugged in. Maybe if you started with some accidental magic instead of the Dudley chase to establish the story and then introduced the werewolf as a twist. Also having the wolves and vamps targeting Harry specifically seems wrong what with the blood wards supposedly hiding his location. Maybe he should accidentally encounter the werewolf being pursued by the vamps...Author's response
The blood wards will be explained later. don't be impatient now. lolHarry Potter, The Twilight Wolf
(#) Cateagle 2010-06-06
Some interesting potentials here, but it does need some tweaking to be more HP-centric. Some of the suggestions made above would work, as would, say, Harry being thrown out of the house and chased by Dudley and his 'associates'. Either that or it needs to be shown that the wards Dumb les put up were nowhere near as grand and powerful as he claimed.Author's response
don't be impatient mate. its all explained eventually.
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