- I loved the story. And thanks for the review on my newest story hehe. I hope you keep going. Your really good, and don't let people put you down. One or two bad reviews shouldn't stop you from writing, doing something you love. And when people say they love it but you need to fix things here and there just listen and trust me you'll be great. I still suck at writing.
Love Pume aka Anuenue
(#) aerosmith14 2010-06-14OH MY GOD THIS STORY SUCKS! STOP WRITING BECAUSE YOU SUCK!!
Just kidding :) I like this story. I love how you decribe almost everything. You never leave out a detail. I agree with pume19, if you ever get any bad reviews, don't let them get to you. You are an amazing writer!
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