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Always Have You In My Heart

by K-JPOP 3 Reviews

I'm new,so please no mean reviews.

Category: Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2010/06/12 - Updated: 2010/06/12 - 1027 words

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  • Always Have You In My Heart

    (#) Zexion_Number_VI 2010-06-12 09:03:39 PM

    This was really good, actually. The one thing you really need to work on is repeating. Fix that and you'll be perfect!!! I loved the description of the boy. Keep the greatness coming!!! :)
  • Always Have You In My Heart

    (#) pume19 2010-06-13 01:57:21 AM

    I loved the story. And thanks for the review on my newest story hehe. I hope you keep going. Your really good, and don't let people put you down. One or two bad reviews shouldn't stop you from writing, doing something you love. And when people say they love it but you need to fix things here and there just listen and trust me you'll be great. I still suck at writing.
    Love Pume aka Anuenue
  • Always Have You In My Heart

    (#) aerosmith14 2010-06-14 05:06:54 PM

    OH MY GOD THIS STORY SUCKS! STOP WRITING BECAUSE YOU SUCK!!

    Just kidding :) I like this story. I love how you decribe almost everything. You never leave out a detail. I agree with pume19, if you ever get any bad reviews, don't let them get to you. You are an amazing writer!

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