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Hey Moon, Please Forget To Fall Down.

by XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2 Reviews

I wrote this awhile ago, as a spin off from a previous story I written (You Remind Me of a Former Love) Brendon's perspective. One shot.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2010/06/28 - Updated: 2010/06/29 - 1311 words

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  • Hey Moon, Please Forget To Fall Down.

    (#) infinite-oddity 2010-06-29 06:45:02 AM

    Oh my damn, that was really good. I loved the moon metaphor more than life itself, and the way you worked in the lyrics. I'm also impressed that you made me feel bad for Brendon, when clearly he's being a douche to both Elle and Ryan. Alas, this was amazing and you're awesome. :)

    Author's response

    :') Why, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for commenting on the moon metaphor because I enjoyed that part of the one-shot as well.
    Thanks for the review. :)
  • Hey Moon, Please Forget To Fall Down.

    (#) BATD 2010-07-03 08:29:26 AM

    I love it. It's brilliant how you can make me feel bad for a cheater. And I've always had a thing for the moon so I liked the moon metaphor! xoxo B

    Author's response

    :D Thank you for the review!

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