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• Fangs for the Memories

  (#) Echelon_cupcake 2010-08-18

  This. Is. Amazing! Seriously, I hate vampires and loved this to pieces. Sequel? :)

  Author's response

  Thank you both very much :)
  Sequel? -Maybe a prologue first and I'll see where it goes from there!
  Thanks for reviewing :)

• Fangs for the Memories

  (#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-08-19

  This is really great :}
  You have talent, keep it up!

• Fangs for the Memories

  (#) jlyEchelonMCRmy 2010-08-20

  This was a beautiful story and a great idea but I think you rushed it a bit. As a suggestion I would try to describe their love for each other more and the scene where the slayers find them could have more to it.
  
  Great story though! Don't stop writing!
  Jen xx

  Author's response

  Thank you for the review and yeah I felt like I was rushing it a little too so I might end up editing that :)
  Thank you :D

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