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Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-09-12
The following ideas and questions I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think. Thats why I have the ideas that fallow, use them or not:
I am glad Harry become emancipated, as well as had a look at his parant's Original will(s).
Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.
-> Harry needs to see what skills he has that he does not know about.
-> Harry needs to see what other families he is relatd to, IE:
Arthur Pendragon, Godric Griffindor, Merlin, Etc.
-> Harry needs to see what blocks (on his magic or himself, any tracking devices or spells on him.)
-> If Harry finds out he only related to the Potters, at least he checked.
Same goes for the Blocks and spells, if he finds none, at least he checked.
I am glad Harry got a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, as well as anythang else he owns.
Harry should have or gotten a Debet card from Gringotts that works in both the Magical & Non-Magical worlds that is connected to his vaults.
Having Harry check at Gringotts would be normal for anyone.
Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Tom Marvolo Riddle Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Thomas Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.
Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, as well as kidnapping Harry, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor, without using his Magic in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.
EVERYTHANG that Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape, and the Dudleys have need to be given to Harry, for what thay have allowed to happen to Harry.
-> Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person. It would be good if Hagrid could finsh his Magical schooling.
-> Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an accessory to how Harry was treated by the Dudleys.
Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK (for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others) and bond to Harry, or whomever Fawkes wishes to bond with.
In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.
Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.
-> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,
thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.
Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) tricorvus 2010-09-19
firstly I love this, keep it up, don't change a thing. Secondly: ur other reviewer "Robert 1958" is from the Great South - he can't seem to spell THING. Or several other words. Bless his heart, let him know that I agree with much he said - but Dumbledork has been held accountable in MANY other Fanfics. Freemaka, u r da bomb!Consequences of a prepared mind
(#) Cateagle 2010-10-03
Heh, I don't think Albus is going to appreciate just how knowledgeable and intelligent this Harry is; it's going to put quite the kinker in his plans. I'm going to be real interested in seeing just what Harry and the Goblins do to him by way of punishment for not carrying out his designated responsibilities.
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