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You Hypnotize Me

by K-JPOP 1 Reviews

One meeting with a sorcerer can change everything for you.And when he gives you those three chances for you love to flourish,you better get one of them right.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Chapters: 3 - Published: 2010/10/03 - Updated: 2010/10/09 - 2298 words

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  • You Hypnotize Me

    (#) shanadienne 2010-10-10 07:37:30 AM

    I've read up to Chapter Two (as that's all there is to read at the moment) and your story definitely has potential. The plot is new to me, which is a major plus, but the characters and setting are unclear. What do Anali, Serepathia and John look like? I haven't a clue other than that Serepathia is very beautiful, but how is she beautiful? We don't need a whole paragraph, but one or two sentences saying how she is beautiful would be helpful. I'm also looking for a description of the setting. I am not getting any strong settings so far.
    All in all, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. :)

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