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• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) adamovita 2010-09-29

  Excellent story, can't wait to read more. I especially liked Harry's dream of Tonks, such bad point in the dream to wake up though.
  
  The only complaint I have is just that you somehow copied the chapter and pasted it below the original.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing, and pointing out the mistake I made.
  I had filled out both areas for uploading text when I published this chapter and it ran the same story twice. I shouldn't have that problem in the future.

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) aredphxbird2 2010-09-30

  A very good start for this story,awaiting next update.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing, and I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it won't be too long until I get it finished.

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) thekev 2010-09-30

  Good start hope to see more soon, I just hope you don't turn Hermione into some psycho like some other H/NT stories without Hermione in as one of Harry's girls.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing.
  I don't, currently, plan on Hermione going psycho but I won't have her go crazy jealous when she doesn't get Harry as a romantic partner. She might go psycho for different reasons or she might stay sane throughout the entire story, I just don't know right now.
  And I am currently working on chapter two. Hopefully it won't take too long to finish.

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) Vanir 2010-10-01

  I'm intrigued. This has the makings of a fine fic and i'm eagerly looking forward to it. There was some serious happenings happening in this chapter and the next one will be very interesting.
  
  Vanir

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing. I am working on chapter two right now, and it's going fairly good. I should have it done by the end of the month (hopefully).

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) juanjoseso 2010-10-03

  it look like dumbledore's faggot lover snape is doing something for that faggot coward draco will never take heir he's the bastard son of a coward and other faggot for snake face good chapter

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing.
  Snape does have something in the works, that may or may not involve Draco, and that's all I'll say for now

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) jabarber69 2010-10-03

  interesting story, but you said this is the 2nd revised version, I reckon I missed the first version! definitely want to see more....

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing. I still have the first version of shadow warrior up over on fanfiction.net, but it will be emoved soon.

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) juggler196 2010-10-04

  I like it. Good start and an interesting plot. You gave us enough info to get an idea of the story, but held back enough to make us want more. Please update soon!:-)

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) GrantLarceny 2011-08-02

  i liked it...draco's tantrum was amusing...snape is up to something!...tonks needs to be thrown to the ground and jumped on...rawr!

• Shadow Warrior second version

  (#) Staryfury0901 2019-02-27

  The biggest problem that Moldy Voldy has is his ego. Piss the mundanes off enough or back them into a corner and the sun shall rise at midnight. How does that fool think he's gonna survive a thermonuclear war?! So far no author has had ANY witch or wizard deal with radioactive land. But then they're so lost in the past they don't even have a clue about that sort of thing anyways. Now that's not to say a lot of those who do know are any smarter. There was a plan to stimulate natural gas wells with nuclear bombs many years ago. But through trial and error they found that the common atom bomb left the gas radioactive and when burned gave off highly radioactive paticles. Things with a half-life measured in the thousands to millions of years. So the tried the hydrogen bomb and got similar results. But the particles were slightly less long lasting. Fortunately, someone with common sense stepped in and basically said " WTF! " and canceled the whole thing. So does anyone truly believe Tommy boy even knows how badly he could step in it? To me, he falls into the category of " No Brain, No Pain! " Besides, cleanse the world? Who's he shitting?! He's killed more magicals and mundanes and ordered even more to make it a serious question. It doesn't matter if you're with him or against him! He'll kill you either way!

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