- I really like this story but, I have been unable continue reading due to not finding it on the sites that you mentioned.
"Bob"? The Founders named the hat Bob? Why not something more in giving with the times like "Alphaseus (Alf to my friends) Haberdasher"? NOW THAT is a believable name for a hat!
I have to say, Harry is written a bit Mary Sue but tolerable so far. The meeting with Percy was just wrong. Percy is almost always written as a prig, but Harry's breaking his hand was too much. You are not going to change someone for the better by bullying them.
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