- 'Thought provoking' is a cliche for when the review can't think of anything profound, but it was. Still, Hermione is a very ordered person, and I think she would have more difficulty than most living with the many traumas we writers put her through. Of course, I turned her into a sex addict in a story a long time ago for similar reasons!
Overall, I enjoyed this on many levels; thanks for sharing
- 'Twas a most enjoyable read and I like the way things ended, no real finale between them but clearly a strong friendship with a strong air of something further later on once both got their heads cleared. It was good to see both getting help while also giving help (I daresay that interlude with Harry did a lot to improve Lavendars outlook on things and when Harry puts his support where he says he will, there'll be some significant changes that'll benefit her and others (he'll likely further annoy those who are already upset about their favored side losing, but I doubt he cares much about their opinions as long as they keep them to themselves).
- I love the story, but I still think that you like to torture us by having Hermione having sex with ron and having Harry see it. I still remember the most Heartbreaking scene that you ever wrote where Harry had to not only hear but be in the same room when the woman that he loved gave herself to ron and he had to suffer through it. But as far as this story goes it is a good aftermath story, Not a lot of writers give them major pschological problems to deal with and having Luna and Lavender show up with their own problems really gave Harry the insight that he needed to realise that he needs help also. Over all this is a great story and I look foward to more of your work.
(#) GrantLarceny 2010-12-16just an fyi...you kick start a bike then the passenger gets on...the way you wrote it harry wouldve probably kicked her and then broke her nose with his butt lol
its all in the details!
Author's response- Depends on the bike. I've owned a lightning and you don't have to put that much into starting them up.
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