(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-29Tells you I like it
'I really hated how my stomach twisted up in knots whenever he looked at me – forget butterflies, more like full-grown anacondas.'
^I think this was my favourite sentence of the whole chapter. It was perfectly placed, and made you understand the feeling Frank was experiencing.
Gags for more
I'll be patient ;) but you'll have to update soon to prevent a riot.
Author's responseawww! You made me blush! And no riot necessary, next chapter will be out in a bit :)
(#) TheSoundNA 2010-12-29spasms I loved it! Seriously, like, the whole Biology scene... Idk exactly why but I'm cracking up and trying to keep it down. :D
OH! And this part: "Gerard's gay, Frankie," he said, rolling his eyes like I'd just asked if the sky was really blue. [blah blah blah inbetween stuff] "You look like you've just died and gone to heaven."
:D Im gonna die if you don't update soon. Do you WANT me to die, m'dear?
Well. I certainly hope not.
Author's responsexD well i needed some way to out him, right? It seemed like the most normal response! And of course I don't want you to die, darling, next chapter should be out early tomorrow :) thank you tons!
(#) DangerDays_ 2010-12-29wow... again, perfect!!! just so well written.
I'm hoping we'll maybe get some Frerard properly soon...?
Upday spoon pleasseeeee!!!! xxxxx
Author's responsethank you sooo much. it means a lot, it really does.
thing is, i don't want too much frerard too soon, y'know? i feel like it should mean something, not turn into just another smutty one-shot. not that there's anything wrong with those ;) but rest assured, things will heat up soon.
(#) AstroSkull 2010-12-30I REALLY, REALLY, LIKED THIS ALOT! :DD
Cant wait for the next update! [:
Author's responsethank you so so so much! It'll be out (very) late tonight (it doesn't exist yet), or in the wee hours of the morning. I'm so glad you like it! Hang on to your hat, it's gonna get better from here ;)
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