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Let's Try That Again, Shall We?
(#) SomeGuyFawkes 2011-01-22
What?! We get all of the awkward, a little sweet, but none of the bumping uglies?!
I don't know about Dave, but I want my money back. ;)
Good otherwise.Author's response
On the one hand, I appreciate reassurance that I won't drive people away when I get to that point...
On the other, the point of that chapter, besides staking out a right to do what I pleased with the story, was to show a contrast between Sybil's perception of the weight and darkness of the wizarding world versus how she feels in the muggle one -- that's a specific effect I want to use in measured quantities. Turning it into a sex scene would have been too distracting at the outset, for my purposes.
There's also the factor that Sybil has a lot of serious issues that I want to deal with carefully. Her life is not particularly sane or healthy.Let's Try That Again, Shall We?
(#) lleon 2013-08-06
Wow, definitely what I expected. Seems Sybil is trying to get a little slice of normality in the Muggle world. Very sweet chapter.Author's response
Thank you! I plan on using her as a sort of foil to the wizarding world, very occasionally, and I was trying to lay out that contrast at the outset.
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