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Forgotten
(#) InuKag 2006-05-16
There is a lot of verbal confusion within these two chapters... however the ending is cute.. it made me like it. but you might think of perhaps changing a few things in the first chapter to get the reader a bit more interested in what is going on. You should elaborate a few things too... like.. the I remember now part, does she remember everything? did that action bring her memory back? or what?
other than that... its got a good idea behind it. nice.
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