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HR4TSTRS'S first try
1 reviewok this is a story im makeing up on my own with the help of my girlfriend i WANT reveiws i want flames i want ideas anything you want to say say it true and full summury inside
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HR4TSTRS'S first try
(#) exninja 2011-03-17
You might want to look over the last paragraph for the I's they are all capitalized
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