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HR4TSTRS'S first try

by HR4TSTRS 1 Reviews

ok this is a story im makeing up on my own with the help of my girlfriend i WANT reveiws i want flames i want ideas anything you want to say say it true and full summury inside

Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Romance,Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [X] - Published: 2011/02/08 - Updated: 2011/02/08 - 547 words

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  • HR4TSTRS'S first try

    (#) exninja 2011-03-17 05:12:14 AM

    You might want to look over the last paragraph for the I's they are all capitalized

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