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Burned

by prodigy 1 Reviews

Raven a girl been abused by her dad and made feel like nothing but crap can come out on top. come catch the next installment "Scortched"

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2011/03/25 - Updated: 2011/03/26 - 1439 words - Complete

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  • Burned

    (#) Vampirechick1159 2011-03-26 09:00:10 AM

    I like it...but you're doing that annoying thing with the point of view in your story where it flickers from first to third person.

    Author's response

    thank you for telling me i know that is a major prblem i have with my writing but i am working on it.

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