- There were a few typos, nothing big (like Kyubi instead of Kyuubi) and you might wanna get a beta to even things out abit. Other than that , I really enjoyed reading it (which is saying something for time-travel fics) and hope you continue.
You're really good :)
On a fan girl note: WOOHOO! a mature naruto, very sexy... clears throat
won't too many things change because naruto went back?
But the village would still be destroyed because that's the reason Kyuubi sent him back and if it didn't, he wouldn't have gone back in the first place (erm...ignore my time travel geek ways. Watched too many movies)
Great job... Onwards!
Author's responseThanks for the awesome response! XD
By all means let the fan girl out, you know you want to ;p
Lol thanks, you were a great help!
I'll take note of your advice
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