'The sky is pink. Bubblegum pink with wispy, turquoise clouds that drift dreamily overhead...' FRERARD ONESHOT! Can dreams really be real?
(#) Paranoia_Destroya 2011-04-22 02:25:58 PMWow...
That started off really desriptive and then just took my breath away. I don' think you could have ended that any other way and have it be as perfect as you made it.
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Author's response:D thank you :D so glad you like it! and thank you so much for reviewing xD
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-04-22 03:57:11 PMAGGGHHHHH UGGHHHHH jelouse DAMN
i hate youuuuuuuuuuu
awwww i'm only kidding >.<
your writing is sooo darn good, i don't even know where to start. You are so talented and i would love to have your kind of writing skills :) it's just trully amazing the way you wright. It placs me on another planet, just like the one frankie and gee are.....i wanna be there again so wright more lol
seriously DUDE you are just fantastic your great. your like my inspiration for definate now, this story is so in my faves now. Despite the very little frerard action its just full of so much creativity and emotion and gahhh i could just go on. I think i shouldnt though lol
i do it too much XD
yeah anyway dont stop your awesomness oh and by the way what do you take to wright this good? cuz i want some lol
i loved everything about this the ending was beautiful and i love how you describe the setting and the feel wow
okay me thinks i will stop now hehe
and still jelouse lol
Author's responseawww, thank you so so much :D i'm smiling like a crazy person at my computer screen now! i freakin love your reviews haha! xD i love your writing too...you are my fave author, so i'm so happy you think my stuff is good :) i really admire the way you write. tbh, i wasn't that sure if this story was good enough to post...but i'm so glad i did post it now :) thank you soooooo much again :D :D this review really made my day :D
p.s. hope you'll update happiness or misery? soon...i really can't wait to read more!! xD
(#) aweirdtree 2011-09-05 11:42:30 AMi almost cried when i realized i can't rate this... damn, it's already green >_< anywayy, this was awesome (: you write soooo well, honestly. one of the best writing styles i know (:
and well, i don't know... kinda like i'd want it to continue but on the other hand... not cause it's already perfect... but then again, you're so talented it would propably just become more perfect... or something... :D oh, whatever, i love it anyway (: thank you!