'The sky is pink. Bubblegum pink with wispy, turquoise clouds that drift dreamily overhead...' FRERARD ONESHOT! Can dreams really be real?
(#) xXDeathwishXx 2011-11-04 12:56:39 AMWow,seriously this is amazing.
All your stuff is amazing,it's just so full of description and emotion that it actually feels real.
I'd love to have your writing skills,and seriously I think one day you could have loads of books published:3
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2011-12-18 07:47:54 PMAMAZING. just.....amazing. i dont even know where to start. the way you write, its just like, i dunno, real. like it feels whenever i read something you write that it actually happened or something idek im babbling. but really this is just awesome!! i love it!! i know, thats like all i ever say on ur stories, but its true theyre all just so good you cant really say anything else!
if u were to continue, itd be amazing and like, just awesome. its already perfect! continue if you like, itd be an awesome story. just, awesome. my ginormus vocabulary i usually confuddle my friends with just disappears when i read what you write because i can only think of "amazing", "awesome", "asdfghjkl" and it is all of those!! everything you write. just awesome.
this works as a oneshot, but would be great continued. anywayz, just KEEP WRITING.
i love your writing your just amazing.
this is really long and im babbling about the same stuff over and over again. but you get the point. i promise im usually much better articulated, lol. xD
Author's responseOh my god, thank you so much! This review has seriously made my day :') I'm so glad you liked it- I do try and make them feel as real as possible.
I'm probably not going to continue this cause i think it's better as a oneshot, but thanks so much for your support (: thanks for taking the time to write such a lovely review! :D
- Gah! I don't even know where to begin!
I cannot explain how near-explicit my love for this is! I violently love this in the best way possible; which makes absolutely no sense, but it does, in a funny way.
Kind of like this story, huh?
That was mind-blowingly... Gosh, I don't even know! There isn't even a word for how amazing this is! My vocabulary doesn't extend to this amount of just pure love and amazing and asdfghjkl;'
This was a beautifully written story, and it really made me think, which I love. This was just purely and utterly fantastic.
I'm sorry for babbling, but asdfghjkl;'! No words for my love towards this story!
I love your work; keep it up!
(#) SadisticLittleFucker 2012-03-09 06:01:56 PMI am awestruck. This is an amazingly written story and I am very envious at how much better of a writer you are than me. I would love you forever if you continued. Darling, this is pure brilliance. Never feel discouraged about your writing because it is absolute gold.