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Chapter three

Gerard plans on telling Mikey about what happened.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2011/04/24 - Updated: 2011/04/25 - 955 words - Complete

Reviews

• I fought them all off just to hold you

  (#) theescapist99 2011-04-24 06:11:13 PM

  Very nice. I'm really interested to see Mikey's reaction. And now I want pancakes. Thanks.

• I fought them all off just to hold you

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-24 06:16:21 PM

  i personally like burnt pancakes !! :) be sure to bless us with another chapter

• I fought them all off just to hold you

  (#) Mcrfan789 2011-04-24 06:31:39 PM

  I like this story. Mmmmm I love pancakes lol. Update soon

• I fought them all off just to hold you

  (#) emocutter91 2011-04-24 07:38:23 PM

  ooooooh yay! Hehehe *claps hands together lightly that was so sweet:) I'm glad Mikey is being supportive of gee and frankie's relationship:) but I do NOT* want any pancakes! I want caramel syrup flavored coffee!!! Hehehe :) xoxo

• I fought them all off just to hold you

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25 12:06:30 PM

  “I hadn’t thought of bring clothes” should either be “I hadn’t thought to bring clothes” or ”I hadn’t thought of bringing clothes” and "Or would I receive more from dad for telling" needs a question mark. Otherwise, good chapter again. But for the love of God, please stop putting things in bold! It's a little cheesey and very annoying. Use italics to exaggerate words. Please.
  
  Have a cookie for adding "/Common People/". That is a great song.
  (.:')= Distorted cookie.

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