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For The Heart I Once Had
6 ReviewsLindsey thinks back on what went wrong.
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(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-25 02:14:38 PM
Wow, mind=blown. This is more than a tad important. i never would have guessed that Lyn-z was pregnant in a million years -
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(#) i_bleed_neon 2011-04-25 02:20:04 PM
I must say this is definitely becoming one of my favorite stories on here. It's so well-written and you do a great job expressing the emotion in every chapter. It's like I can picture everything perfectly in my mind and I can feel all the emotion each character is going through. I am definitely surprised by the reasoning for Lindsey's relapse but I think you did very well with that little twist. It was not expected at all and I can't wait to see what Gerard's reaction to this news will be. Great chapter and I cannot wait for the next one. :) -
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(#) Paramour 2011-04-25 07:10:43 PM
Oh, just a tad. Trifling, really, to the overall plot, but I can see why you felt the need to plague us with such filler.
/sarcasm. Wow. So, she's pregnant, and extremely unhappy about it The reason for the unhappiness is where it gets hazy for me. Shall I ask for a pointer, or will this work itself out? I'm thinking it's because she doesn't care as much for Gerard anymore, but I could be wrong. Hmm. ponders.
Is she going to tell Gerard? Or is this going to shake out 50s-style and she'll disappear into a convent for a few months? -
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(#) annabel-lee 2011-04-26 12:00:51 AM
That was sad, I almost cried. I think Gerard would have rather had the abortion then have Lyn-Z load herself up with cocaine. Poor baby too, I can't believe that Lyn-Z would be soo hell bent on NOT having a baby that she'd do that. -
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(#) paradoxicalcynic 2011-04-26 01:12:49 AM
That was bloody amazing!!
And awesome...and good things like that :D
The plot and characters and everything just works out!
Cant WAIT til the next chapter! :P -
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(#) Scarlet_Flame_666 2011-04-26 01:58:19 AM
A brilliant chapter!! Update soon please xx