(#) i_bleed_neon 2011-04-25I must say this is definitely becoming one of my favorite stories on here. It's so well-written and you do a great job expressing the emotion in every chapter. It's like I can picture everything perfectly in my mind and I can feel all the emotion each character is going through. I am definitely surprised by the reasoning for Lindsey's relapse but I think you did very well with that little twist. It was not expected at all and I can't wait to see what Gerard's reaction to this news will be. Great chapter and I cannot wait for the next one. :)
- Oh, just a tad. Trifling, really, to the overall plot, but I can see why you felt the need to plague us with such filler.
/sarcasm. Wow. So, she's pregnant, and extremely unhappy about it The reason for the unhappiness is where it gets hazy for me. Shall I ask for a pointer, or will this work itself out? I'm thinking it's because she doesn't care as much for Gerard anymore, but I could be wrong. Hmm. ponders.
Is she going to tell Gerard? Or is this going to shake out 50s-style and she'll disappear into a convent for a few months?
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