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Morning Cigarette
1 reviewMatte loves Ash. Ash is oh so gay. Matte is not oh so gay; or so he tries to tell himself. Matte is punk, he's cool, he's RIGHT. (yaoi, m/m, slash)
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Morning Cigarette
(#) Folle 2006-08-15
I've a friend with the same... tone to her writing. And I've a great respect for her abilities - to the point of being insanely jealous whenever she writes anything. She has a certain lack of terror that I seem steeped in, that allows her to give voice to grit and not care one bit for if the characters want a happily ever after or not. But it's not the sarcasm I've seen so often in others' writings, but instead, a seemingly strong desire to dive into the very heart of the personal issues displayed in every story she writes.
I don't know, truth be told, if she's that courageous. It just seems that way from where I stand.
And while it was a cute, accustomed line "Wait.. I ddin't MEAN what I said about my best friend" you still have managed to completely turn it around to a gritty, fearful act, rather than a precursor to a fluffy story of love denied.
Whatever the outcome, it's a delight and I look so forward to reading more!Author's response
Thank you for the lovely review hun! I've decided that it's too much work for nothing to post here, so please do check out my fics at fictionpress.com (my nick is Limited Edition).
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