Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness14 Reviews
FRERARD! falling for your student teacher? a bad idea. falling for a vampire? an even worse one...and sixteen year old misfit Frank Iero seems to have a talent for them....
(#) ShannonThePirate 2011-04-19 12:56:02 PMCan't wait for more, this was realy cool, i was disappointed that i didn't get to be franks friend but still, it is cool... If there is a teacher called mr(s).Een i will laugh so hard... Hallow-Een! :L i'm terrible :L
- I love it already:D I think Raven was a good pick for Frank's bestfriend. I just hope I'm picked for Mikey's girlfriend;) ANYWAY! I love you and your stories! RIGHT MORE!:)
(#) xxKilljoysxx 2011-04-19 05:42:33 PM:D Great story ! Cannot wait for more!! Please please update soon! I love your stories! :)
I'm so happy that I was final three on being Frankie's friend(: Thank you so so much for considering me, it made me happy:D
Raven was a good pick though. you're right, it works in with the story:)
Looking forward to this story.. still hoping im picked for mikey's gf ;) Up to you of course
Update soon please:)
(#) Keep-it-Ugly 2011-04-19 05:50:40 PMPlease CARRY ON! WE'LL CARRY ON! (only if you do)
(#) perfectzombie 2011-04-20 12:48:49 PMthis sounds like it's going to be awesome(: also i love the song you got the title from. hope you update soon :')
(#) SmallHeightBigEgo 2011-04-20 01:40:16 PMHell yeah I like it (: You need to continue, and like, soon ^^
(#) annabel-lee 2011-04-20 11:32:35 PMI loved it! Very descriptive, and realistic character dialouge (I think I spelled that wrong). Update soon please!
(#) paradoxicalcynic 2011-04-21 05:31:17 AMNice and original intro to the story and plot :)
Might want to use a little less description. Found that sometimes there seemed to be too much - maybe it's just me :P Remember less is always more :)
However, the majority of the story was pretty darn awesome!! You made use of characterisation, contrasting short and long sentences and description really well!!
Look forward to the next chapter :D
(#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-04-21 07:05:10 AMAwesome i loved it I think Raven was a good pick for Frank's bestfriend. I hope I'm picked for Mikey's girlfriend. but its still awesome please keep updataing :D
(#) sineadlovesmcr 2011-04-29 05:30:30 PMooooooh update soon!you cant leave me hanging