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I Bet Your Not Fucking Pretty On The Inside

by AnotherKnifeInMyHand 3 Reviews

The Torture

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Gerard Way - Warnings: [!] [V] - Published: 2011/06/06 - Updated: 2011/06/07 - 1316 words

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  • Don't Stop If I Fall And Don't Look Back

    (#) bloodless_souls 2011-06-07 08:25:40 AM

    lol taste of ink?
    and when he was kissing along his jaw line i thought he was gonna fuck him...self O_o lol i was like is that still technically masturbating?

    Author's response

    YES! well done you get a high five from the fro man :D

    yeah i thought about former Gerard raping present Gerard but i thought that might be going too far, y'know just a bit. But still as you can see this story is pretty messed up :) thank you for reviewing.
  • Don't Stop If I Fall And Don't Look Back

    (#) andreajp 2011-06-07 09:49:46 PM

    Well my mind has been fuck. I just either refound (idk if that's a word, but fuck it, it is now) or found this story. Let me just say, you have a twist fucking mind..... I love it! Yes you are right I did not expect before Gee to break down in the end, I thought he would be jumping for joy. And now all they have to do is find him in this hole, someone needs to wear a leash at all times lol.

    Anyway to cut to the chase, update soon or I'm gonna send creepy Gee after you.
  • Don't Stop If I Fall And Don't Look Back

    (#) emocutter91 2011-06-09 10:35:01 AM

    holy fucking hell...
    Gee is present-day Gerard
    Gerard is 'old' Gerard
    This is sick and I love it:) gotta say though, you kinda scared me for a moment, because I thought 'old' Gerard was gonna rape 'present day' Gee. I was like 'if you touch him... I mean, yourself.. I mean... The fuck?'
    This is like the one of the most original things I ever read anywhere!
    Uh, would it be weird that I want Gee to comfort Gerard? Even though Gee is hurt physically, emotional is worse, and I feel strange for saying that I don't want Gerard or Gee to feel in pain, especially emotionally.
    I knew that would sound strange...
    I can't wait for the update:) xoxo Jamie





    Author's response

    Thank You :D

    sorry if this is all really confusing but i'm a confusing person so i think its perfectly normal in a fucked up sort of way :)

    I can't promise this story has a happy ending though

    More updates soon, i just have to use Google translate for my Spanish exam first then i'm off to do the next chapter :)

    xxEmii

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