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Bedtime Stories
(#) PartyPoison 2011-06-22
Your stories can get pretty depressing, I will admit. But nonetheless they are still very well written (At least I think so)
I find that a lot of people just write fluff and smut and it's nice once in awhile but sometimes it becomes too much of the same thing. (Although I don’t know how anyone could ever have too much of Ryan and Brendon :P) I like you’re stories because your plot lines are different and have twists in them. Albeit, they may be sad twists but they are unexpected and add to the story a lot. I don’t know how highly you can hold it but that’s my opinion.
I am very glad that you tried writing again even though people told you that you weren’t any good. Now I get to read your brilliant stories =) I try to read all of them, I can’t really explain why but your style of writing always keeps me intrigued and wanting more.
If I start a story I always want to know the end, whether it’s sad or happy. Even if this story is going to be short it’s been wonderful so far so its got to be good.
Now, I hope that made sense but it may not have considering that I’m a little out of it.
Bedtime Stories
(#) patdfan 2011-06-22
i feel so bad for forgetting to review the last chapter you wrote i decided tht ur my fave author on here i have read every one of ur stories so far and my fave would be the Vegas Strip BUT! this is by far my second fave i love how descriptive you are that it makes you feel like them of feel like your in the room with them.. its amazing and i love how you sometimes write abstract ifs funny like one time my moms like what are you reading and i was like... the best fan fiction writer ever, my mom just looked at me weird and walked out of my room lol :) but i mean even if its depressing i still read it despite the fact i lose about 50% of bodily fluids from tears and then i love the happy endings where i smile huge and my whole day is made lol (is tht sad?) but what ever you do i promise ill read your a amazing writer and is it weird tht i feel special when you reply to my reviews lol :)Bedtime Stories
(#) marissasorrentino 2011-06-23
This chapter is sad but really good. I like it a lot. I hope you will continue. I honestly think that you captured the real thing behind the break up. I think this is somewhat of what actually happened. You got it right and I LOVE it. This happened but no one can realize it. You have captured the real story. Great job :)
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