What Ray and Gerard do while Delilah, Mikey, and Frank are at school. Leading up to the text session between Gerard and Delilah.
- You love to write, I love to read, we make a good team *highfive*
Dude it's impossible for me took pick my favorite part of this, it's like trying to pick the cutest kitten! So instead I'll go by characters. For Sweet D, I loved her since she busted her butt in the library lol I don't know I just find her adorkable. This last chapter was my favorite Gerard scene I could see him acting like a little kid caught stealing a candy when Ray got him phone. Mikey/Frankie, the skittles, need I say more lol. I don't really have anything that sticks out for Ray, he's been all 'fro guru on me.
That's all I could think of at the moment, but I do hope you update again tonight ^_^
Author's responseAww thank you! I'm glad you find my story interesting! Delilah is kind of a representation of me, in a way that's how I'd act in that sort of situation XD Gerard, Mikey, Frank, and Ray well I just don't know, I just imagined how'd they be if they acted the way they do know but in teen version :D
i most likely will update tonight but it might be shorter, sorry bout that
thanks for reading though! xoxo
(#) imjustagirlnotahero 2011-06-21 10:45:21 PMI'm going to quote a tweet I sent you ealier, if you don't mind, "DAMMIT ELI YOU WRITE SO GOOD COMPARED TO MY PATHETIC LITTLE ONE" :DDD
Author's responsebleh whatever love! Anyways, how did you like the Eliza part??? I wasn't sure how I did with that .____.
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-06-25 08:38:23 PMwow... you're really good ^ ^
you're better than me, but i'm only starting out lol :D
all i can say to the end of this chapter is NAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!! This is really cute... i hope Gee gets Delilah. i like Gerard more than Frank (only just haha) so i hope that he ends up being happy, but i also hope that frankie gets a hot-az chick to date in the end, coz then it'll be fair :) keep up the writing!
Author's responseKeep reading it gets better! :D I'm glad you like it so far :3 xo