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Everybody scream

Three guys. All like the same girl. Who will she pick?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Crossover - Characters: Frank Iero - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/06/24 - Updated: 2011/06/25 - 776 words

Reviews

• Everybody scream

  (#) midnightblackparade 2011-06-25 04:07:31 AM

  Ooooohhh good so far. Who will she choose? Carry on and update fast :) xoxo (i am now a loyal fan)
  
  XoXoX ~~~Meghan~~~

  Author's response

  I will update asap I think I'll be finished by this morning so stay tuned. :)

• Everybody scream

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-06-28 11:28:21 PM

  2 words: Mary Sue.
  
  The writing wasn't bad but there are a lot of errors grammatically speaking. Letters need to capitalised, spelled correctly, etc. I'll keep reading but the main character seems slightly clichéd at the moment. I like your description of the characters, though.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much I'll take that in mind next time.

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