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Could Have Been

I can never write a good summary!!!Winry's pov. Based after the series. Better than it sounds.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Edward Elric, Winry Rockbell - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/06/01 - Updated: 2006/06/01 - 307 words - Complete

Reviews

• Could Have Been

  (#) sPaZ~mOnKeY 2006-06-08 04:32:03 PM

  sounds heartfelt, do u actually feel this way? lol jk! definetly good luv tha
  story! ps. hi spaz bucket!!!

  Author's response

  ME, feel that way about Ed?....no....blush..
  Thanks for the review spazz bucket, glad you liked it!!!

• Could Have Been

  (#) ChuChu101 2006-10-16 08:47:02 PM

  I really enjoyed this little drabble of yours! It was filled with lots of emotion...
  
  Although, I think you could've added more to it to make it flow better and seem less rushed. It kinda sounded like it was repeating a lot of things over again, but hey, that's what constructive criticism is for!
  
  Hope you keep writing more! :) Oh, and thanks again for R&Ring my stories. I'll return the favor and do the same for yours too! ^^

  Author's response

  I agree 100%! I'll see if i can edit it and switch some things around a little, any opinions you have are more than welcome!!! You keep writting as well, kay!!
  
  
  ~ kaori-chan ^-^

• Could Have Been

  (#) Marie 2007-01-06 09:57:02 PM

  Wow Kinda deep.

  Author's response

  well, i hope that means you enjoyed it ^^; it was a little rushed,but it turned out alright. Thank you so much, i really appreciate comments ^^

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