(#) RebelAgainstTheEnemy 2011-07-06Good filler, but you need to work on building your characters a little. Mikey and Frank are usually only mentioned. I can get a good grip on the fact that Frank's a juvenile son of a bitch, but I'm not picking up on Mikey. Yes, he's shy. But why is he so close to Gerard? Why does he want to know if Cadence is good enough for his older brother? Think about getting into that stuff soon, or it's gonna be really confusing.
Author's responseOh, for the the love all things Radke... gimme a break! Ahhh... kidding, dear Adam. But thanks for the little note. I'm really trying to work on Mikey. I want him in the story more, I jut don't know what to do with him. I'll have to work on him, for sure.
(#) DeathCookie 2011-07-07Duude, every time you say it's just a filler, I never feel that! You put just amount of effort as you do with longer chapters and it's really, really good. Sorry I'm always behind on reviewing, it's just Ficwad is SWAMPED with fics these days..(more bad than good..) and I have to search to find your fic. Love it though, deary! :D
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