Leonie proves to be something, but Archie's competitive side is dominating and he is convinced that she is under Cronus' control. A rematch is called to prove her innocence--a rematch that ends in ...
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-25 08:24:05 AMARCHIE!!! Update soon, now you really have my attention. VERY GOOD!!!
Author's responseI agree--ARCHIE!!! I'm glad I have your attention. I know he's kinda invincible, but have you ever seen one of those playgorund stumps? The egdes are so sharp they're a shftey hazard. peers at your works Wow, he's your favourite character isn't he? He's pretty popular! OMG!! Thanks, you really thinks I'm "very good"? struts around, crashes into computer desk and ends up with maroon rosebuds in hair--my Mum puts them there
- Natural Way of Things, it's called the Nature of Things, if I recall. Awesome job! Although I highly doubt a new girl would be able to beat Archie, but hey, your story! What will happen to Archie next? The suspense, the action...hope you update soon!
Author's responseOops...ta for fixing that. I guess I'm not geood at rememering thing like that T_T But, I can remember everything else, go figure that one out! XD Lol
pokes tale If you were that eager to beat someone, you would. Meep. I dunno if a new girl could beat him either, but the way my plot's going, it will come clear in a while.I hope I update soon too!
- I do love this story, but I would like to say that the prophecy only calls for seven. Is there another part of the prophecy that we don't know about? Is she by any chance related to a lycanthrope? Archie seems a bit out of character even though he is a sore loser, I can't see him accusing a newcomer of siding with Cronus. And the guys even pointed out facts to prove she wasnt. And usually he listens to reason.
I love this story and hope you update soon.
Author's responseI'm glad you love it. As for the prophecy, youll find out soon...for now, let's just say Cronus isn't an idiot, he knows about reverse pschycology. I don't even know what a lycanthrope is. O_o Does he? I can't see him getting beaten by a new guy, especially if the new guy is a weird girl nerd, and listening to reason. If Atlanta or Jay or someone beat him, he might have. A new girl who looks like she spends 99.99% of her life with her head in a book? Not the Archie I'm familiar with!
I'm glad you like it and hope I update soon too. I'm very unpredictable with my update times!
(#) eros_cupid 2006-07-05 10:44:05 AMDude, your stories are better then mine. Way, way (2 centuries later....) way... way,... better.
Author's responseOnly cos you don't put enough detail into your stories, and don't acually write in STORY form. Writing in script form bugs me out...thanks for the comliments.
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-28 02:53:00 PMNow that you keeping it... Update!!!
Author's responseI'm working on a oneshot so I can't until that's out and done...T_T sorry.
PS:If you keep up the reviewing status you have created...Expect a dedication for the one after the oneshot. ^^