Akito thinks about the past and about the pain he's inflicted on Kyo. AkitoxKyo poem. Rated just to be safe.
- This is good writing, i can't wait to read your fic! You seem to be able to write emotional stuff really well, i suppose it helps if the author has been through some emotional issues themselves, it can only make you stronger as a writer :-)
Keep up the good work.
Author's responseThanks. It's hard to find people that actually take interest in what I write. And yeah, I have gone through stuff. The fic will be up here soon. I've already got it on fosff.net, but I wonder if it would have more success on here.