"Fetch the doctor at once,"
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2011-09-12 12:29:34 PMohhhh an update:3 happy-dances around the room love it! please update soon (/the suspense is killig me/)
trololol...mhh what to say what to say (/i do reviews not so well in my...stfu/) lol taken from the stupid rime thingy german kids who start to learn english often usexD
sorry if i'm irritating, just a bit hyper right now...
and now i'll kindly enlighten you....the rime is 'i was sleeping very well in my quitsching bettgestell, but in the middle of the nacht is es dann zusammengekracht' i have no hobbysxD
re-reads this and blushes uhhhhm...
aaaaanyway please update soon:)
Author's responseI`m glad you like it, I`ll update as soon as I can. I`m used to hyper people, don`t worry about it. I get hyper all the time, especially on sundays for some reason. 9I know it isnt sunday...sadly, this sunday rocked)
That rhyme sounds pretty interesting, I don`t actually know any German but an old friend had family living there. Thanks for reading
(#) TheGiinger 2011-09-13 02:42:58 PMOMG THAT WAS AMAZING
FRICK YEAH- I'M AWESOME!
Ahem. Yes, I loved the update so much, you can really see you developing your writing style. I loved the cliff-hanger and the awkwardness of Gerard and the rest of the Way's.
Keep writing and don't feel the need to tell every little detail in time- jump if you have to ;)
Author's responseI`m glad you like the chapter and your character. I`ll try to update soon, thanks for all the advice