Naruto is the way he is because...he watches Sasuke sleeping? Basically a run-through of things that make Naruto, Naruto! Warning: shounen-ai, not humour! m/m, NaruSasuNaru, ONESHOT
(#) Romariin 2006-06-12 01:14:51 AMWow. Even though really, the thought of someone watching you sleeping is pretty creepy, with Naruto it seemed like a kind of romantic thing. Instead of a stalker, he was more of a guardian in my eyes.
This was very beautiful, I loved the way things flowed. You never missed a beat. With the repeated 'Sasuke-kun', it set a tone to the story. I really liked it, it was well worth the read. Though, I'm not sure that's how Sasuke would have reacted, you made it seem as though that WAS how he would react. You bend his characteristics in a way so that the way he reacted to Naruto made sense in my mind. (That's some pretty complicated stuff to explain, haha)
I loved the way you incorporated Naruto's habits into the story, offering us your version of why he does the things he does. Like always eating ramen, and why his hair is always messy. It makes sense, haha, and your reasons are very believable.
Plain and simple, I just loved it. Fantastic job! [Goes to look for you on FF.N (my username is Romariin)]