(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-10-13 03:29:50 PMThis is a fantastic first chapter, and a great concept.
Someone did a fic a while back where Frank's mind became childlike due to an accident, and Gerard looked after him.
Now, because you're an amazing and original writer, i know you'd never dream of plagarism, and this is just an unfortunate coincidence. I'm just warning you before some dickhead newbie to the site accuses you of things i KNOW you wouldn't do :).
- I am liking this :) loved the way it was written.
I hope bandit is okay.
oh and on a none serious note, garlic dip in pizzas is the best.. I always have to order more when ever I have dominos :)
Never had a papa johns pizza... may have to try them one day!
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-10-13 05:04:00 PMYay new story clap clap when you described what happened to Lindsey it made me want to hurl. It was so graphic (its a compliment don't worry).
I do hope you don't kill Bandit, there's tragic and then there's heart wrenchingly sad i can't read anymore tragic.
Update soon cos i'm lovin this already.
(#) -TheGhostOfYou- 2011-10-14 05:42:26 PMI'm already into this story, well, to be honest all of your writing is fantastic. Please update soon.
Oh and in regards to ChloesGreenDay's remark; that story was after Frank had attempted suicide, so at least the storyline for this is different.