(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-10-13This is a fantastic first chapter, and a great concept.
Someone did a fic a while back where Frank's mind became childlike due to an accident, and Gerard looked after him.
Now, because you're an amazing and original writer, i know you'd never dream of plagarism, and this is just an unfortunate coincidence. I'm just warning you before some dickhead newbie to the site accuses you of things i KNOW you wouldn't do :).
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-10-13Yay new story clap clap when you described what happened to Lindsey it made me want to hurl. It was so graphic (its a compliment don't worry).
I do hope you don't kill Bandit, there's tragic and then there's heart wrenchingly sad i can't read anymore tragic.
Update soon cos i'm lovin this already.
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