Oneshot written for anti bullying week...Frerard-ish..Please read and review. [Sorry, slight edits.]
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2011-11-20 06:37:44 AMThis is so... I don't even know how to describe it. I could say that it's amazing, that it's incredible, that it's sublime; but that just wouldn't do this beautiful piece of writing justice because it so much better than any words that my mind possesses can even begin to describe. It's so deep and truthful and there were times that a tear did genuinely escape me. Congratulations on such a great, for lack of a better word, oneshot! :)
Author's responseseriously, thank you so much, that means a hell of a lot :') I'm so glad you liked it- I was pretty nervous about posting it cause I wasn't sure how people would receive it. Sorry I made you cry! Thank you so much again, and thanks for taking the time to review :D
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-11-20 06:49:55 AMthis is amazing. wow... every word laced with feeling and deep thoughts. its like you have scooped a handful off the top of a huge lake, like voldemorts lake in the 6th harry potter film, we only get this glimpse into you. you are an amazing person - i would really like to meet you?
my schools doing stuff for antibullying week. i mean, it never helped me in the shit i went through but it might help someone else so i'll be buying a wristband!!
Author's responseAww, thank you!! :') that's really sweet...yeah, it'd be awesome to meet you too- you're like, one of my favourtie reviewers..:D
Sorry you had to go through shit with bullying..I did too, so I kinda know what you're talking about.
thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot (:
(#) aweirdtree 2011-11-20 07:40:34 AMumh... i want to cry. you write so very beautifully, thank you (:
and this story also made me think about one of my very important friends... it's not like she's that dead, but... sometimes i'm just so worried about her...
and if this was about your friend, well, i hope things will look up. if not soon, at least sometime in the future.
um... thank you still one more time (: this story kinda like made this sunday a whole lotta better - and i usually hate sundays, so (:
(and i know it sounds weird that this story made my better, but it's true. dunno why, i like melancholic stuff.)
Author's responseaww, thank you so much, that means a lot :') that sucks about your friend...I really hope things get better for her, and I know how much it sucks to be really worried about someone you really care about.
I hate sundays too, so really glad the story made yours better! thank you so much, seriously, so glad you liked it and took the time to review!
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2011-11-20 08:00:46 AMyou.made.me.cry. nothing more to say.
it's so so well written and just so...true. lots of people write angsty sad fics but few are as realistic as this.
i find this, no all your storys and one-shots inbelievably awesome. you're so talented! fuck, i quoted you along with gerard way! that's how much i love your storys!
i hope the person this is about gets better, i really do.
Author's responsethank you so much! :') sorry I made you cry though! So glad you liked it...this review seriously made me 'awww' so much- thank you! :D and oh my god, really? you quoted me with Gerard Way? :D may I ask what the quote was?
thank you so much again!
(#) inthemourning 2011-11-20 01:12:23 PMThis is so beautiful, yet so melancholic and sad. I love it and it really gives me something to think about. You're really talented and I reallt like all of your fics! Btw I love how you describe the atmosphere and the characters of the story. It's perfect. Xo
- I can't even... I don't know where to start. I'm just filled up with emotions right now. This story is so beautiful because it's not hiding the truth. It's not fluffy and all happy ever after. It's raw in such an elegant way. You write so utterly perfect and this is one of the best things you, and anyone, has ever posted on Ficwad. You are amazing.
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-11-21 08:28:40 AMThis is so saddening and beautiful. Every word is tainted with some sort of emotion: pain, anger, love, melancholy; it's as if you paint a picture of your scenery, then you add on a transparent, glossy coat of emotion, then lace the edges with great vocabulary and punctuation, and you finish.
It's just beautiful. You're a truly amazing writer.
Be proud, this is one of the most stimulating reviews I have probably ever written. :')