“Well, the physical rehabilitation was a success but one of them was hit in the head. His memories are still intact, but there were some complications...”
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-01-12 09:45:35 PMDefinitely interesting!
I love how much detail you've placed in this first chapter. It sounded realistic. I could definitely imagine the scene.
Author's responseThanks so much! I'm usually sloppy with descriptions and I'm so glad you appreciated the effort I put into this chapter!