(#) monstrice901 2012-01-22 06:44:13 AMI CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS OVER! It's a seriously amazing story, and I can only thank you for writing it. It really is great - the concept (even if you did steal it ;D), the plot, the way it's written - it really is just epic.
Feel so sorry for the boys though - the whole thing really was doomed to fail! Can't say I'm surprised Gerard died, but still sad. Really it was Bandit who ended up worst off - poor girl. But seriously, the mistakes those boys made; they never had a chance! It was nice Ray coming back at the end though.
As I already said, really great story, and I hope you'll be starting something new soon! If not - fair enough - but if so, I'll be looking out for it!
Also, I don't think I've ever commented on the epic-ness of your user name!
See ya soon with any luck, dude!
(#) shannleighm 2012-01-22 10:27:24 AMThis was so beautiful and moving and i won't lie to you! It's made me find living easier! Such a tragic end to Gerard's life but such a nice rconcillation at the end! You're an incredible author and this is one of those stories i wish i had written as i would be so proud! :) xxxx
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-01-23 10:52:01 AMYou deserve it so much! It's pathetic that this story doesn't have more reviews, especially considering the copious amount of shit that gets read on this site. You've done something great with this, like shannleighm said it's really one of those stories that you wish you'd written. And this is your first fanfic?! Amazing!
Please keep writing. I'm so stalking ALL your stories now!