It's been years since Axl and Slash have talked to or seen each other. Each has moved on and forgotten the other. Or so they thought. Slaxl. Don't like? Don't read
Yeeaah...nice start,but your story is going way too fast. You also may need to redo the summary. How can Axl and Slash forget each other after being in a band together?
It sounds like it's off to a pretty good start is there going to be more?
Great start, you should have a part two X)
You should continue. It's good.
More..... Or else¡ Im loving it.
asdfghjkl write more. please. i'll give you a cookie!
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