"The first and only person to help me out since Gee." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-25 04:02:36 PM:3 :D :o :OOO
hehe that's what I was feeling reading this XD you are such an awesome writer, I can't wait for the rest, moremoremore :D
Author's responseThank you very much! The next chapter should be up tonight.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-25 05:32:06 PMOmg! Cliff hanger! Oohing nnooeess!! I love it!! I lie it I love it!! It's amazing! Poor Mikey :( update when u can!! :)
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm sooooooo pleased that you liked it! But yeah; poor Mikey.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thanks for taking the time review! :)
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-26 02:00:53 AMAh me- that went from seriously cute, to deppressing to complete WHAAAA NOOOOOness. I loved it! Especially 'the broken carnage that’s left of it' because carnage is like my favourtie word ever (well after Orange)also cliffhanger?!! Nooooooo you are very lucky that you are one of those authers.. wait authers? Is that name? *authors that update at light speed or I would have to hunt you down and feed you vegetarian fish fingers untill you did, and seriously they taste liek biscuets and not in a good way. Sorry I rambled so much in this, I've been having time off school due to illness and I think the social deprovation is getting to me -sigh- anyway fantastic job as usual I love you.
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm sooooo pleased that you liked it! Carnage is one of my favorite words too (behind procrastination and geocentric)!
I have tried vegetarian fish fingers, as I am a veggie, before... it was not a pleasant experience and so I will try my hardest to update tonight!
I hope you get well soon!
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-26 12:46:52 PMI love the way Mikey actually seems to see the bad in Frank. Maybe I'm still too caught up in your old story Mikey, but I like the way he knows not everyone is perfect and that Frank can be an actual bad person.
I can't wait for the next chapter :)
And seriously? You don't need tips on how to improve, because really, your writing is at the same level (maybe better) than plenty of authors of real books that I've read. Just keep it up! (In a failed attempt not to sound like a school report sigh)
Author's responseI think that I'm still a little bit caught up in old story Mikey too, I often find myself referring back to how he was in my past stories when I'm writing him in this.
The next chapter will be up tonight.
Aw, thank you so, sooo, soooooooo very much; it's extremely kind of you to say such nice things about my writing!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-26 02:30:15 PMI love it!!! This is a great chapter once again. I love how much Franks words can came Mikey down like Mikey kinda trusts him but he's not sure if he should. I thought it was really good at the end with the fire alarm and how it reminded Mikey of the house fire. It was really clever!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update when you can!!! :)
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm soooooo glad that you think this is alright!
I wanted to show that Mikey wants someone to be there for him, someone to care, and he thinks that Frank might be that person but he just isn't at all sure at the moment. At least, that's what I hope came across.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)