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Disenchanted

by CosmicZombie 9 Reviews

'Trapped in this tiny space suffocated with a million wasted wishes......' PLEASE READ?!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/02/02 - Updated: 2012/02/16 - 356 words

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  • Disenchanted

    (#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-02-02 06:37:19 AM

    i liked it-very deep:) xk
  • Disenchanted

    (#) lwarfield3 2012-02-02 02:54:09 PM

    Very good, loved it, very deep, as killjoy_blackrose
    said.
  • Disenchanted

    (#) PartyPooperX 2012-02-03 08:51:29 AM

    wow. deep. you have a talent for poetry ;) I like
  • Disenchanted

    (#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-02-03 01:45:34 PM

    Oh my lord this is so extremely beautiful. It's very very astounding and I love the detail that's implanted. I also love the repetition halfway through the poem; it's really effective and just spoke very strongly to me. You're a very talented writer, and this is beautiful. I have a feeling you'd be absolutely outstanding at writing lyrics.. you ever tried it?
  • Disenchanted

    (#) ImJustFine 2012-02-04 01:54:46 AM

    Hey! This was really amazing, I love how your language is so, don't get me wrong here, but simple, yet powerful and touching. This was beautiful and I honestly think you should write more poetry. You're very talented :)

    - ImJustFine
  • Disenchanted

    (#) inthemourning 2012-02-05 09:09:36 AM

    I totally love it. As simple as that. It could be an amazing song also, have you ever tried writing lyrics? Xox
  • Disenchanted

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-02-07 09:42:23 AM

    Absolutely stunning. Well done! :)
  • Disenchanted

    (#) KITTEHZ 2012-02-07 02:20:04 PM

    It was touching. Really, I would like to say more, but I has sports (remind me why I do them?)
  • Disenchanted

    (#) lwarfield3 2012-02-12 03:31:20 PM

    Hey, this could make a really good song- do you have a band?

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