'Trapped in this tiny space suffocated with a million wasted wishes......' PLEASE READ?!
i liked it-very deep:) xk
(#) lwarfield3 2012-02-02 02:54:09 PM
Very good, loved it, very deep, as killjoy_blackrose
wow. deep. you have a talent for poetry ;) I like
Oh my lord this is so extremely beautiful. It's very very astounding and I love the detail that's implanted. I also love the repetition halfway through the poem; it's really effective and just spoke very strongly to me. You're a very talented writer, and this is beautiful. I have a feeling you'd be absolutely outstanding at writing lyrics.. you ever tried it?
(#) ImJustFine 2012-02-04 01:54:46 AM
Hey! This was really amazing, I love how your language is so, don't get me wrong here, but simple, yet powerful and touching. This was beautiful and I honestly think you should write more poetry. You're very talented :)
I totally love it. As simple as that. It could be an amazing song also, have you ever tried writing lyrics? Xox
Absolutely stunning. Well done! :)
(#) KITTEHZ 2012-02-07 02:20:04 PM
It was touching. Really, I would like to say more, but I has sports (remind me why I do them?)
(#) lwarfield3 2012-02-12 03:31:20 PM
Hey, this could make a really good song- do you have a band?