(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-05What would the sequel be about with Mikey?
SO happy to see this updated so soon again! =) You just made my night.
It's awesome how Ray and Frank knew each other before and I love how you wrote that scene. It was dark... definitely different.
Also, talking about his first kill was excellent back story as well. I wonder why Ray's dad told him not to call again? That's weird. Or maybe that's not important to the story? I just wasn't sure...
As always, I loved this update. =)
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-02-05Wait-- is Gerard dead? I'm confused so please set me straight... (well, as straight as I can get which ain't that straight)
Author's responseWhat no! Gerards been kidnapped by Ray but Frank doesn't know that. He just thinks that Ray kidnapped some guy that looks like Gerard. Therefore he wants to relieve his sexual/homicidal frustration by watching Ray kill this kid.
- Wow, only just finished reading this! A complete shocker! This story is very original and I really like it. I'm not sure I'd like a sequel with Mikey...I just love him too much to want to read about him getting killed or whatever xD but if you have something good written, go for it!
Author's responseThe stories' actually not finished. And the Mikey sequel shall be fluffy. and short
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