(#) foreveryours 2012-02-26Okay what is wrong with you, why don't you think this chapter is good? I think it's freaking amazing! I ashamed to say was almost crying! Oh my god you have to post more! :D
Author's responseThanks, happy you liked it :) I thought I hadn't captured the emotions right but, considering you were almost crying, I guess I had! :L The next chapter will be up at the weekend either Sunday or Saturday ^-^
- Sara xoxo
(#) FlyingSmoke 2012-02-26You put Shockers in there.
xD Nothing like a little blast from the past... I do wonder though, that must be before the change and before she was BLI's slave... Or is it? Because it seemed for a moment there Korse wanted her to tell him where Party was so he could go kill him... I unno. It's a time period.
Other than that, the chapter was good. (I mean, that was good too, but the whole chapter was good.) I should've read last chapter though... D: I'm so sorry I didn't. I felt lost... But then I was found. And I'm glad those two have feelings for each other. I figured Haru had some for Kobie cake (HA I USED IT) when she didn't kill him with the scissors, but I didn't realize the feeling was mutual. I'm kinda glad. Well, not kinda. I am glad. Very glad. Ecstatic. Enthralled. Enthralling narrative, male sibling, tell me more.
Well, yeah. Tell me more. 'Cos I wanna know if Party gets Haru or not...
Update soon? Por favor?
Author's responseOui, I shall update soon. I already have a faint idea where all this is going and I even have an idea for a sequel if I ever feel like writing it. The last chapter for this is written down too but I'm no where near it yet, this is all just starting. I think you'll like the next chapter though; let's just say that Ray is a bit of a badass when he wants to be ;)
Haha! You used Kobie Cake! I was wondering how long it would be until that nickname rocked up again.
This is going to be one of the most intimate chapters for now because trust rises and falls in this fic constantly. And in the next chapter, Party Poison is not going to be a happy bunny; he is going to be evil, demented Playdough Party who still to this day haunts my dreams D: haha
Does Party get Haru? Maybe he will, maybe he won't; you'll just have to read the next chapter ;) muhahaha leave you in suspense! :)
This is set before Shockers is a robot. She knows who Party Poison is but probs won't become a robot till the sequel- if there is one.
Next chapter will be up soon :)
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-02-26D: i just read the whole story so far and OMFG I CIRED!! IT. IS AWESOME!! I LOVE EVERY WORD OF IT!! PLEASEPLASEPLASE UPDATE SOON COS IT IS AMAZING!!
Author's responseUpdates are on Saturdays or Sundays, but the wait will be worth it for the next chapter (I hope) :L
- Sara xoxo
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