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Teddy Bear Blues

by BendersBreakfast 2 Reviews

A Devil is given an assignment to seduce some good christian teens into a life of sin, if he fails he will be demoted into cleaning toilets for disgusting imps. Little does he know that there is a ...

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Published: 2006/06/27 - Updated: 2006/06/28 - 3099 words - Complete

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  • Teddy Bear Blues

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-06-30 06:56:54 PM

    You have some minor grammatical errors. A lot of your quotes are run-on sentences. Periods and commas go before quotes, not after.

    Heh. Baal finally gets mentioned. As long as no one says "suck my Baals,"
    I'll be good.

    Heh. More later.
  • Teddy Bear Blues

    (#) xtearcatcherx 2006-10-25 03:53:32 PM

    Ha ha! I loved it :D Lol Mr. Duck :P

    Keep it up :P

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