- Rewrite them, or simply beta them? Either, I'm up for. Another question: do we have to keep the punctuation of the first sentence?
Author's responseRewrite. And no, you don't have to keep the punctuation; continuations are always welcome. Also, I'm a very big fan of yours. I'm kind of stalking Spare Change.
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-03-07 07:05:09 PMchallenge accepted. :D hopefully
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-03-07 07:18:29 PMOh, and with the first sentence, can I keep it, but split it up just a bit? Just a liitttleee? So that it flows differently? It will still be grandfather clock, nine in the afternoon, 69 Salter place, etc, but it will go a little differently? maybe? please?
Author's responseYes. I'm always open to new ideas. Show me what you've got.