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Give My Heart Back
(#) Bad_Romance 2012-03-12
You have to write what happens between them both!Author's response
Like write what happens that night from different POV's?Give My Heart Back
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-03-12
Oh wow. This was a really good chapter and you know why? Because you're right, it didn't make sense! :D
It described perfectly what both Hayley and Gerard want...and they don't know what they want. It described their lust and the need for pain and all that kinky shit and everything! Great insight into both characters...I actually think this might be your best chapter so far!
Thanks for updating! I thought you'd disappeared! :'(
SFAuthor's response
I'm so glad you got all of that! I wasn't sure I wrote it in the right way but that's exactly what I meant for people to get out of it!
Aww, thank you! I worked pretty hard on it but was fairly unsure about posting it so thank you. :D
Ohh, no way! I'm definitely going to be sticking with this story. I'm quite proud of it. I couldn't imagine just abandoning it. X.x
Thanks for keeping with the story!Give My Heart Back
(#) McrmyBVBparawhore 2012-03-12
Fucking great chapter, I can't wait for more. I agree with the reviews above!
Please update as soon as you can, I love this story =3Author's response
Thank you!
I'll definitely try to. :DGive My Heart Back
(#) Frankies_Hands 2012-03-12
I found this story today. In class. Read most of it in class. Got caught twice. Yet it was worth it! I love this story, it's suspenseful. My favorite kind.
I cannot wait for an update. :3Author's response
Oh no!O.o I'm sorry that you got caught, twice! But I'm glad it was worth it for you. Thank you for the kind review. :D I'm glad you're enjoying the story!Give My Heart Back
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-03-13
Despite the fact that assholes are assholes and drugs never help..anger is still sexy. Does that make sense? Cause it should. ;)Author's response
It really does make sense and it's so sucktacularly true in RL.
RL= Real Life.
The fact that I just shortened that actually really pissed me off so I had to add this.
When I get tired, I get texty/dumb. Though I never shorthand in text because it annoys the hell out of me.
Sleep now? I probably should.Give My Heart Back
(#) IloveMCRmy 2012-03-21
God Gerard is always so damn sexy. This was fucking great as usual. Update soon!!Author's response
Thank you!
Yeah, I couldn't resist putting them in that situation... and honestly... Everytime I write about him I get lost in the Gerard-Amazing-Fest.
Hopefully you enjoy the new update :D
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