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Always On My Mind

Frerard. Gerard is attracted to a good-looking mysterious boy he finds in a music store. Gerard isn't sure that the young man loves him back. Meanwhile, Mikey is obviously crushing on the store cle...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2012/03/13 - Updated: 2012/03/14 - 563 words

Reviews

• Always On My Mind

  (#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-03-13 05:53:43 PM

  Naw- it doesn't suck! But on the contrary, your sentences were sort of short and choppy. :/
  
  Not many other problems, and it was actually really good for your first time on here! :) a lot better than some crap on here... Lol.

• Always On My Mind

  (#) XxMCRfreakxX 2012-03-13 07:21:15 PM

  Thanx Mikeys Glasses. ^_^ Yeah. I agree that my sentences were messed up. lol I wrote that last December. .o. I think that in the later chapters it isnt that choppy. But yeah. Thanks for noticing and I will check for that in my upcoming chapters. :)

• Always On My Mind

  (#) ArsenicRainbowDash 2012-07-02 09:31:05 PM

  HOLYFUCKINGGERARDSHIT YOU. ARE. AN. AMAZING. WRITER.
  DON'T YOU EVER LIE TO ME AGAIN.
  XDDD

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