(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-23This is incredible! I really like how kind and gentle both Frank and Gerard are towards Mikey, it makes me feel like I really care about the characters. It was interesting to see how Frank's behaviour changed from being so playful in the first chapter to so caring and sad in this one; it work very well and clearly got across how much he really cares about Mikey. I love this story so fa an can't wait for more! :)
Author's responsethank you so much! I wanted to show how much Frank cared about Mikey so I'm glad that's what stood out to you. thanks for leaving such a lovely review :)
(#) tortillachip 2012-03-23Wow. Such an emotional chapter! Very sad, but it's also very well written and I really like how everything unfolded. It didn't happen very quickly, but it wasn't dragging out either. The whole time I was like "Oh, Mikey! Frank and Gerard (and me) are going to be here for you!" Well, great job and I can't wait for more!
Author's responsethank you! I'm glad you
iked the pace of the story, as I wasn't to sure. the next chapter shouldn't be too far away.
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