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Chapter 13

by KobraBlaze 4 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/03/29 - Updated: 2012/03/29 - 1063 words - Complete

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  • Stay Together

    (#) RockMusic 2012-03-29 04:39:28 PM

    It's never boring. Gerard is so sweet. I may sound like a selfish bastard and this sounds so cliche.. but update soon... Pleeeaaassseee

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. I should update again tomorrow hopefully with something better.
    P.S. You don't sound like a selfish bastard. It makes me smile at the fact you want more of my stuff! :)
  • Stay Together

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-29 05:07:46 PM

    I loved this chapter! It had me feeling sympathetic with both Way brothers; with Mikey because he's going through more than either of the other two know and with Gerard because he's just trying his hardest to look after his little brother. It was interesting how you used Mikey not wanting to have his dressing changed through shame and him jumping at being snapped at, both showed just how shy and broken he is on the inside. It was nice to see him eating again, but the fact that he's only doing it because he's scared of Gerard getting mad at him makes me kinda nervous because if he's only doing it through fear then it won't work long term.

    Once again you've left me begging for more and I can't wait to see where you take this story next. Great job! :D

    Author's response

    You're such a nice reviewer! Thank you. I'm relieve that you liked it. Yes both Way brothers are going through too much to handle right now and it is really affecting them. Gerard is trying really hard and Mikey is just a mess who is afraid of losing Gerard. Im really happy the thing about Finally eating but only for Gerard, and that it came through alright. Gerard is only getting his hopes up. You really pick up each chapter as I have it in my head!
    Thank you so so so much for you reviews. They are really helpful!!!
  • Stay Together

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-29 06:32:44 PM

    Totally not a bad chapter! It gave a closer perspective on Mikey and Gerard's relationship (which I loved!). You're great at making Mikey so anxiety-ridden. Hope you update soon!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Thank you so much! This and the last chapter were really about their relationship so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the lovely review! I hope to update tomorrow night! :)
  • Stay Together

    (#) Neblina 2012-03-29 10:12:36 PM

    definitely NOT boring, i'm really loving this story. i like how Gerard is so protective of Mikey.
    can't wait for the next update and see how this story goes ^_^

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm so glad you like the story. I should have an update soon!

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