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What Do You Want From Me?

"Go slit your wrists, little girl." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/12 - Updated: 2012/04/13 - 193 words - Complete

Reviews

• What Do You Want From Me?

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-13 10:33:43 AM

  I have goosebumps. This is so bleakly true- I love the way it's not glossing over the truth.
  Another stunning poem added to my favourites...keep writing!
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, I'm pleased you think it's the truth. I didn't want to gloss it over or sugar-coat in any way, shape or form.
  Thanks for reviewing! :D

• What Do You Want From Me?

  (#) snake56tongue 2012-04-14 11:20:54 AM

  This is beautiful!
  I'm sorry, I know I overuse that adjective, but honestly, it is.
  This is exactly how I feel most of the time, as if no matter what we do, we can never truly please anyone.
  You captured the feeling perfectly :)
  

  Author's response

  Thank you very much!
  You don't overuse and please don't apologize; I love hearing it! :D
  I know what you mean, it's as if as soon as we do what they want they want us to change again.
  Thanks, I'm glad you feel I captured it alright! :)

• What Do You Want From Me?

  (#) ValentineRevenge 2012-04-28 02:57:08 PM

  This is so true in so many ways yet so sad... Our world is such a fucked up place...

  Author's response

  Yes. Yes it is. :)

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