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"Go slit your wrists, little girl." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-13 10:33:43 AMI have goosebumps. This is so bleakly true- I love the way it's not glossing over the truth.
Another stunning poem added to my favourites...keep writing!
Author's responseThank you very much, I'm pleased you think it's the truth. I didn't want to gloss it over or sugar-coat in any way, shape or form.
Thanks for reviewing! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-14 11:20:54 AMThis is beautiful!
I'm sorry, I know I overuse that adjective, but honestly, it is.
This is exactly how I feel most of the time, as if no matter what we do, we can never truly please anyone.
You captured the feeling perfectly :)
Author's responseThank you very much!
You don't overuse and please don't apologize; I love hearing it! :D
I know what you mean, it's as if as soon as we do what they want they want us to change again.
Thanks, I'm glad you feel I captured it alright! :)