(#) tortillachip 2012-04-13This wasn't bad at all! I thought it was really good! I'm glad Mikey at least responded to Gerard's news about their dad. It's progress, even if Mikey had been drinking. Great job!! Can't wait for more!
Author's responseThank you. Mikey is making a little bit of progress by replying. It depends on his mood which makes everything so difficult. I'm very happy that you liked it and I hope to finish the next chapter now!
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-13I loved this chapter, just like all of the other chapters to this story! It's interesting to see how Mikey takes things and it keeps the reader suckered into the story. I feel sorry for all concerned in this story; Mikey because he is deeply depressed and in need of the help that he's too shy/scared to ask for; Gerard because he only wants to help his baby brother but just can't because he both doesn't really know how and Mikey won't let him; Frank because he's all of a sudden been dragged into the lives of two teenagers with more problems than most people can cope with and just wants to help, even if that's a possibility that could end up hurting Frank.
Anyway, great job and I can't wait to see how Mikey feels when he's sober! :D
Author's responseWow. Thank you! It means a lot to see that you like the story so. Your reviews really help! I'm really glad you see what each of the characters are going through. That is something I have been trying to get through in the last couple of chapters. Mikey certainly isn't helping at all when he won't co-operate with Gerard but who could blame him?! Frank is definitley been dragged into this situation but he most certainly took it upon himself to fix it, not exactly considering consequences. I'm very glad you have enjoyed the story so far. I am finishing up the next chapter now which does show how Mikey feels about it all. Thank you you so much for reading and reviewing the whole way through! It makes me smile like crazy!!!
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